Veng introduction video

[Twinkleberry 112]

I metatagged this video to the ratcatchers osrs quest guide by slayermusiq1, because my name is lil rat, i actually pop up in his suggestion feeds now, i check on an offline account. This is going to generate new people seeing vengeance for the first time so i want to get my videos quality enough that people want to come and join us. Please peep this video any feedback positive or negative greatly appreciated, I do need to learn how to get rid of the exilent bar on top, i'm waitin for jonttu to get back to me he's going to help me with that. and i'm going to put the vengeance banners on my vids but i dont have proper software yet.. Either ways i worked real hard on this i hope you all enjoy it, if not tell me why so i know not to keep repeating the same mistakes, just honest feedback no trolling plz.

 

[Local_News 249]

good music choices, like the vid only thing is we need some more footage in mystics because we won't want to look like a bunch of venes hahaha

[Trae 132]

not really a intro video, intros should have 5-7second clips cwa pkn etc big hits stuff that captures peoples attention this just looks like a wildy pk vid overall just to slow paced

[keaune 83]

If I was someone who just found out about Vengeance and watched this video, then I would say that the video is a 'bit' too long for an intro like if you could trim it a lot and only show the parts where you kill, pile, lure, and rush as the pirates then I would be more happy with it, everything summed up in a 2-3 minute video would be what I would want to watch. But, that is just my opinion, doesn't have to be that.

 

Apart from that, it obviously shows that you have spent a lot of time and effort on making this video. Now that is dedication!! Good job! 

Edited July 20, 2019 by keaune

[Origen 531]

Not bad Twink. The video is just in general too long for being an introduction. It would in my opinion need to contain a wider variety of content in order for it to be an introduction video.

Other than that, it's a decent video. Keep it up.

[Twinkleberry 112]

16 hours ago, Trae said:

not really a intro video, intros should have 5-7second clips cwa pkn etc big hits stuff that captures peoples attention this just looks like a wildy pk vid overall just to slow paced

I'll definitely work on it. thank you.

Edited July 20, 2019 by Twinkleberry

[Twinkleberry 112]

8 hours ago, keaune said:

If I was someone who just found out about Vengeance and watched this video, then I would say that the video is a 'bit' too long for an intro like if you could trim it a lot and only show the parts where you kill, pile, lure, and rush as the pirates then I would be more happy with it, everything summed up in a 2-3 minute video would be what I would want to watch. But, that is just my opinion, doesn't have to be that.

 

Apart from that, it obviously shows that you have spent a lot of time and effort on making this video. Now that is dedication!! Good job! 

i like this feedback and will incorporate into my own editing. thank you for the detailed response brother!

Edited July 20, 2019 by Twinkleberry

[Twinkleberry 112]

17 hours ago, Local_News said:

good music choices, like the vid only thing is we need some more footage in mystics because we won't want to look like a bunch of venes hahaha

Working on my own return tab atm, can't speak for others, but we've been trashing kids in rags. can't wait to break out the full mystics for CT today!

 

[Sybren 2,255]

dude, I love how you're actually putting these vids up there the right way in the search engines